There where good people how gave as the card . i like how there was a lagesh room for when the people where going out for there last day there. The food was very good i like the cookey and the jose it was daleshes . i like how you have good garden like the flow the three . i like the windowe as the fins . i like the logowe with the net words . i love sote that the wayter has to where it looks amzing . im shore i will go there aging when we go . You have good sarvis . so i give you 5 stars good. I fing you can make your pelose beyta they where rock siled i nealy died with the pelowe. You could of make your aven biger . i fing you cold make your mikywave biger so people could make it biger for peole to put biger fings in there like rice pacter left overs like qwike meyls they are big so you make all of it so you do not split it. People like the alavayter because you have a big alvayter .
By Jayden Zuppicich
I like how you have made a good start to your blog post. I like all this detalle in your work. next time make some more inprovement on your writing
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fank you Dylan i mite need to look at yours to
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ReplyDeleteHi Jayden. Its Ian from Rimu class.
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Maybe next time you could check your capital letters. Did you enjoy posting this ? Kind regards Ian
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ReplyDeleteHi Jayden its me jacob from rimu class I liked that you made a good start on your blog but next time can you cheek your Capital letters. Did you enjoy posting this? If you did i hope you had fun doing this work and i hope you get better by adding capital letters thanks.
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