This week i have been practise using capital letters and full stop with my slid place live a comment
Thursday 27 September 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Jayden!
ReplyDeleteYou have worked hard to create a colourful book here - Ka pai! I really like the pictures you have drawn using shapes and the fading colours you've used. It looks very spooky for your monster story! Next time can you make sure that you can easily read the writing, because some of it is the same colour as the background :)
From Miss W
Hi Jayden Its Me Jacob In rimu i like your slide about the monsters but on the second slide there are not enough full stops like at the end there are not any full stops in there so maybe you can try and fix it. but i like the Colors you have used in your monster story so have a nice day Bye.
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