I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, 23 November 2018
ted the pizza from tm 2
this week we have been right amaganashen writing about all aver fings with bools and friut t;
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ReplyDeletehi i like your work jayden and your background and i like your writing great work (:)
ReplyDeleteHey Jayden I like the idea of tidde the pizza I think you should make your writing black so you can see it more clearly apart from that it was really good story.
ReplyDeleteFrom Lucy Kind regards